It is likely that you provide more context than necessary. For example, you could've asked: "My emails tend to be too long. Does anyone have tips on writing co

It is likely that you provide more context than necessary. For example, you could've asked: "My emails tend to be too long. Does anyone have tips on writing concise emails?" Obviously your post was not an email, so the additional, narrative context you provided is welcome. In emails you should aim to provide just the key info, and to elaborate on any context in other forms of communication/documentation. I typically try to aim for just 2 lines of content. One is a statement of fact or a problem, the other is a question or a 'call to action'. I break this rule often, but I always pause to think if there is really a good reason to stray from that rule or if I'm just ranting/chatting. Often if people want context they'll come find you or call you.