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Awesome. One suggestion I have is to select either the first or third person and use the same voice for both the title and the article. I think its ok to writ
by stretchwithme 16y ago
Awesome.
One suggestion I have is to select either the first or third person and use the same voice for both the title and the article. I think its ok to write your own bio, but to show that you are writing and then appear to pretend that you are not is a bit annoying.
I don't mean to imply any actual pretense, of course, because there is nothing wrong with using the third person. I just don't think it works here as a literary device. Not that I am any expert.
And I'd consider the first person. You have achieved a lot and there's nothing wrong with saying so yourself.
- markbao 16y agoHey, thanks! I wrote that bio when I was 16 and just added on when I started something new, so it's basically like an exquisite corpse except by only one person (but just as much as a hodgepodge.) So it's a mess. But thank you for the suggestion. My new page is a lot better (though still very much in progress: http://cl.ly/2o0g3f3e2d1f022S3d2X http://cl.ly/2o0g3f3e2d1f022S3d2X)
- stretchwithme 16y agoand when I have a clue what I'm clicking on, I'll gladly check it out :-) good luck.