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I don't disagree with you but I think you are jumping around a lot and your ideas don't flow well as presented. This reads more like an outline or rough draft
by pmorici 16y ago
I don't disagree with you but I think you are jumping around a lot and your ideas don't flow well as presented. This reads more like an outline or rough draft than a finished piece IMO.
- alnayyir 16y agoI'll do some more editing next time.