This was really well written, but I couldn't help laughing at the comma splice errors in his own prose after calling out his students for it in the first paragr

This was really well written, but I couldn't help laughing at the comma splice errors in his own prose after calling out his students for it in the first paragraph. example: > Soon we hurdled through the turnstiles, joining the throngs of near-nude Midwesterners, our procession a timpani of aqua socks.