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Communications point: the several pages of diatribe before the presentation of your product is in the way of expressing the more material value of what you are
by sonnyblarney 7y ago
Communications point: the several pages of diatribe before the presentation of your product is in the way of expressing the more material value of what you are doing, i.e. the 'product'.
Your specific worldview is going to be less interesting to most people, outside of HN'ers who probably don't mind.
You can summarize all of that in a tagline, and tuck away the elementary school valedictorian bits on another page.
Also, the registration process before we even get to 'see what this is' is a little much, it'd be nice to be able to 'get in there' without having to give up my email address.
So try to get to they 'why it matters to your visitor' much quicker.
Good work though.
- z0mbie42 7y agoThank you for this honest feedback! Today is the WHY announcement: https://www.kerkour.fr/blog/the-just-cause-and-the-infinite-game/ https://www.kerkour.fr/blog/the-just-cause-and-the-infinite-... The what is an ongoing process :)