>Holy run-on sentence, Batman. I'm supposing you'd suggest I use a list format where each item is on its own line, then? I may make that change. >You have tw

>Holy run-on sentence, Batman. I'm supposing you'd suggest I use a list format where each item is on its own line, then? I may make that change. >You have two problems, the presentation of the topics aren't all that engaging, and your writing style could use some improvement. As a writer myself, I have to wonder how many revisions that went through. Some of my work goes through several revisions since publishing and some hasn't gone under any yet. >Examples of real life applications might make it more interesting as well -- a lot of the drama of HN stories are where the design didn't quite work in the implementation. This wasn't my most exciting article, by any means. I have a Common Lisp library I've written that's rather well-documented. I suppose I could submit that next, as something more interesting. I appreciate the critique.