I hope you don't find this too patronising, but I thought I'd offer you some feedback: > Adults won't get the same treatment like children. I'd render this as

I hope you don't find this too patronising, but I thought I'd offer you some feedback: > Adults won't get the same treatment like children. I'd render this as "Adults don't get the same treatment as children". > He speak Should be "He speaks" > we are engineers, not the language teacher This should probably be "not language teachers", but the whole phrase doesn't make a great deal of sense. I'd probably say "not copywriters". > If I correct every minor quirks of him, he got a feedback "If I corrected every minor quirk, he'd get feedback" Generally "got a feedback" should always be "get feedback" - the tense of get was wrong, and feedback isn't countable, so it doesn't take an article.