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Well that was a huge waste of words. > Mike looked back. He saw the pack getting closer to catching us. He panicked. He offered a deal. > A rider who is weake
by jonknee 7y ago
Well that was a huge waste of words.
> Mike looked back. He saw the pack getting closer to catching us. He panicked. He offered a deal.
> A rider who is weaker or at a tactical disadvantage will sometimes offer a promise not to sprint for the win if the stronger rider will promise to stop trying to get away.
> Near a sign that said there was one kilometer to go, we rounded a left hand turn. I looked back at Mike. I said to him, “You remember our deal?”
> But Mike can’t remember if he acknowledged the other racer. He can’t remember if he nodded yes, the way I remember it, or if he didn’t do anything at all. He remembers only that when he saw the finish line, a banner across the road at the top of a short abrupt hill, he suddenly was sprinting.
> And as Mike drove, he made a call he’d long wanted to make. Long needed to make. He said into the phone that he had that jersey with him. He said, I cheated. I’m sorry.
- umvi 7y agoSome people enjoy the details. It lets you immerse yourself momentarily in bike racing culture which is incredibly interesting. After reading Lord of the Rings: "Well, that was a huge waste of words." > Bilbo gives long lost evil ring to son Frodo > Frodo goes on a long journey with friends to destroy the ring > A few friends die; a lot of enemies die > Frodo can't destroy the ring in the moment of truth because it has corrupted him > It gets destroyed anyway There, saved you from reading 1000+ pages of literature
- jonknee 7y agoAnd some people don't so I provided the key parts. Surely someone else will appreciate it, but if not it doesn't in any way prevent you from reading each and every sentence. I would also very much appreciate a summary if someone posted a 1000+ page piece to HN.
- plopz 7y agoThis is why I think many people find they enjoy reading the hobbit more than the lotr trilogy. It's much more concise.
- EugeneOZ 7y agoSometimes details don't worth it.
- t0mbstone 7y agoSpoiler alert!
- smbullet 7y agoThanks!
- megy 7y agoI know, just like Romeo and Juliet. They both die. The end. What a waste of words.