My favorite was when he just starts making up actual scenarios. This paragraph is classic... "It’s mid-summer 2014 and a drawn-down U.S. garrison in embattled

My favorite was when he just starts making up actual scenarios. This paragraph is classic... "It’s mid-summer 2014 and a drawn-down U.S. garrison in embattled Kandahar in southern Afghanistan is suddenly, unexpectedly overrun by Taliban guerrillas, while U.S. aircraft are grounded by a blinding sandstorm. Heavy loses are taken and in retaliation, an embarrassed American war commander looses B-1 bombers and F-16 fighters to demolish whole neighborhoods of the city that are believed to be under Taliban control, while AC-130U "Spooky" gunships rake the rubble with devastating cannon fire." When you're using fictional accounts that you made up as proof of your concept it's probably a sign you need to find some more supporting research before you publish