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I don't know if you're looking for any design critiques, but since that's what I know here goes: - The logo is not very readable. The letters are squashed toge
by sgdesign 16y ago
I don't know if you're looking for any design critiques, but since that's what I know here goes:
- The logo is not very readable. The letters are squashed together and the gradients are a little too strong. Subtle is always better.
- The pure white background behind the tagline is very harsh. I suggest using a light shade of beige instead.
- Your content needs some rythm. People hate reading big blocks of text, so you should add in some headings and lists.
- Maybe you're planning to add more slides to the carousel later, but right now you really don't need it. You could take out "who is it for" and put it in the sidebar instead.
- The two call to action buttons get lost inside the illustration. I suggest putting them in the brown bar instead.
- The tagline could really use some typographical love. There's a ton of gorgeous free fonts on FontSquirrel.com, just pick one from the top 10 most popular.
- The sign in link should probably not be placed inside the nav, most people expect it to the top right of the site.
That's just the things that jump out at me from looking at the homepage for 5 minutes. Hit me up on Twitter (@SachaGreif) if you have any questions or you'd like some more advice.
PS: I almost forgot to say, congratulations on launching what looks like a truly useful product!
PPS: I often go to Kyoto, not that far from you!