It would probably look better with you on camera for the first minute. It's hard to stay on the page when the audio has nothing to do with what's in the video.

It would probably look better with you on camera for the first minute. It's hard to stay on the page when the audio has nothing to do with what's in the video. EDIT: Now that I've seen the full video, I'd say this would work a LOT better if the whole thing is a video of you doing the demo with the phone and everything.