I don’t even prefer the first sentence: The “I’d suggest” is completely redundant. The rest of it is more difficult to read and parse than the GP’s version, whi

I don’t even prefer the first sentence: The “I’d suggest” is completely redundant. The rest of it is more difficult to read and parse than the GP’s version, while the pacing seems slow and the path through the content muddled. To each his own, I guess.