Your loss. It's a great article, with a researcher's results woven in with the author's personal experience of it as a (fairly compelling) "worked example". Wha

Your loss. It's a great article, with a researcher's results woven in with the author's personal experience of it as a (fairly compelling) "worked example". What you describe as "rambling" is 2 sentences of introduction to the former, followed by 2 sentences of introduction to the latter. If your attention span can't handle 4 perfectly relevant introductory sentences, that's not the article's fault.