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Pretty nice. Some comments: * the url should probably be something like mechanicalteeth.com/switch. Or throw some keywords in the URL for SEO purposes (/ipad/s
by JoachimSchipper 16y ago
Pretty nice. Some comments:
* the url should probably be something like mechanicalteeth.com/switch. Or throw some keywords in the URL for SEO purposes (/ipad/switch-multi-user-web-browser/).
* the "coffer" graphic breaks consistency with the rest of your graphics. Not everything needs to be a screenshot, but if everything else already is...
* the dark bar should always be at the same height on the page.
* I'm not sure I like the moving (as you from page to page) "available on the App Store" graphic.
* Your headings look a bit plain next to your header, and next to Apple's (over)-slick websites.
* I'd add some more space about the tilde (~) in the header, especially to the right.
* The contrast between your gray page and white form is rather large.
* I was not actually aware that there was a form until a minute ago.
* The feedburner link throws a 404.
* The purpose of the form isn't very clear to me - you have no blog that I can see, almost no content on Twitter. Are you trying to build an audience (you'll need more content), is this a support channel, or..?
Notwithstanding the above, I think it does look nice and may be useful to the iPad-using part of humanity. Good luck with it!
- mcobrien 16y agoThat's awesome feedback, thanks! I agree with pretty much everything - my plan is to have a lot more on the site (which is based on a theme I bought), but I also wanted to release early and iterate. Sounds like I have some iterating to do, but it's nice to be busy :)