Willing to bet that with some improvements to the original design the results would've been even better. For example: – Your navigation at the top is illegibl

Willing to bet that with some improvements to the original design the results would've been even better. For example: – Your navigation at the top is illegible. Theres very little contrast and it's hard to read. Make that more clear, higher contrast. - Your main CTA ("Japanese candy surprises in your mailbox twice a month." [Email]) is also hard to read because of the orange and the custom font. Swap out the orange for a more vibrant color (maybe the orange color of the button) and use a nicer font that's easier to read. - MAKE THE FONT SIZE BIGGER - Add in some of the elements you added in the new design: When the next box is going out, etc.) Your original design had an air of authenticity and honesty to it. The bought template seems like a copycat. Keep (and improve!) the original!