Also using iambic tetrameter. share WHAT you WANT with WHO you WANT The only issue I have is that the comma indicates a break which seems unnatural to me. Tha

Also using iambic tetrameter. share WHAT you WANT with WHO you WANT The only issue I have is that the comma indicates a break which seems unnatural to me. That isn't always bad if you're trying to emphasize two different thoughts but I think of that slogan as a single cohesive thought rather than two different ones.