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This is so poorly written; no wonder print journalism is dying. "that Kleiner's ever invested in over it's life." "from a guy who's firm" "What makes Doerr's
by ryanwaggoner 16y ago
This is so poorly written; no wonder print journalism is dying.
"that Kleiner's ever invested in over it's life."
"from a guy who's firm"
"What makes Doerr's boast even more fascinating is the story about how KP's investment in Zynga never happened." (Then what are we reading about?)
"According to lore" (Is that your official source?)
Not to mention that the article is made up of 13 paragraphs, not one of which has more than a single sentence. Contrast that with any article from NYTimes.com, which is likely to have short paragraphs (as news-style writing does), but not single sentence paragraphs.
- byrneseyeview 16y agoThis article was contributed by Business Insider.
- lsb 16y agoThe fact that they outsource their news-gathering doesn't bode well either.