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The man needs to hire a copy editor. My girlfriend would have that down to 70% of its current length on the first pass.
by jen729w 8y ago
The man needs to hire a copy editor. My girlfriend would have that down to 70% of its current length on the first pass.
- intopieces 8y agoThis was my thought too, it sounds like something written for Wikipedia Simple English.
- smt88 8y agoGiven Facebook's massively global user base, it's not unlikely that it was edited to have a similar style as Wikipedia Simple English.