If they are serious they should scrub out all the weasel words and other opportunities for lawyers to squeeze stuff through loopholes. A lot of the wording does

If they are serious they should scrub out all the weasel words and other opportunities for lawyers to squeeze stuff through loopholes. A lot of the wording doesn’t cover disclosure to third parties or use of third party tools acting on behalf of law enforcement. Also it should be expanded beyond LE to cover any entity other than Cloudflare and the owner of the data.