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> I'm a bit adverse ... Besides (what I consider) the introduction of the article, what else do you consider "stilted" advertising language and how can I impro
by MikaelMayer 8y ago
> I'm a bit adverse ...
Besides (what I consider) the introduction of the article, what else do you consider "stilted" advertising language and how can I improve my writing?
- threatofrain 8y agoI shouldn't have been so harsh, as I was initially scanning against suspicious submissions. I criticized the language because I thought it sounded like a kind of advertising from TV.
- iicc 8y agobtw averse != adverse