Not completely on the subject, but I had to read the first sentence 5 times, before I was able to understand its meaning. Then I realized it was too long, so mo

Not completely on the subject, but I had to read the first sentence 5 times, before I was able to understand its meaning. Then I realized it was too long, so modified it to following version. Is it better or worse? "A team of researchers has stumbled on a question that is mathematically unanswerable. It is linked to logical paradoxes, that were discovered by Austrian mathematician Kurt Gödel in the 1930s and it can’t be solved using standard mathematics."