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FYI, your English looks rather good for someone who's learning it. The only real issue I saw is how you make almost every sentence into it's own paragraph.
by 9ec4c12949a4f3 16y ago
FYI, your English looks rather good for someone who's learning it. The only real issue I saw is how you make almost every sentence into it's own paragraph.
- oemera 16y agoThank you for your tip. You are right my comment has to many paragraphs in it and they are often misplaced. I will try to improve that.