The college student would be regarded as pretentious because they can't follow through with the expectations set by that sentence. They haven't developed a mast

The college student would be regarded as pretentious because they can't follow through with the expectations set by that sentence. They haven't developed a mastery of all the techniques and an intuition around using/abusing rules to enhance the reader's experience. A student could create that sentence, but they could not create the story.