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Adeo Ressi: How To Perfect The One Sentence Pitch
- erikstarck 16y agoMy company, Startup Garage, is developing a web based social tool to help people with an idea get started, get going and get ready to launch their startup using techniques from games, the customer development process and social pressure when you have more passion than funding and haven't quit your day job yet. Phew. That's a long sentence. EDIT: Basically, we're a virtual pre-incubator. That's at least a much shorter sentence.
- fleitz 16y agoToo long, tighten it up. How about? My company, Startup Garage is developing a Facebook application to help entrepreneurs overcome their lack of motivation by providing social pressure to execute. If the people already have a job, have you considered doing something similar to app sumo to sell them services? If they have a day job they have disposable income, but not capital.
- robobenjie 16y agoMy Company, Anybots is developing a video conferencing robot to help remote employees of mid-sized companies stay in touch with the main office more effectively. Also "parents who are female"? if only there was a short english word to replace that wordy noun phrase.
- fleitz 16y agoI'm pretty sure you're being facetious but moms? Lol
- chunkbot 16y agoMy company, stealth web-scale database company, is developing a web-scale database to help web-scale companies solve their problems with web-scale data... our secret sauce is our web-scale database.
- pontifier 16y agoMy company, Crossies.com is developing a media marketplace to help consumers find and buy music and movies at low prices, and let them sell media they own when they are done with it.