The old adage "write drunk, edit sober" applies here. The real point is to stop censoring. Writing is really two skills: - Building the habit - Being comfortab

The old adage "write drunk, edit sober" applies here. The real point is to stop censoring. Writing is really two skills: - Building the habit - Being comfortable editing out things that don't work BTW, the your original post came across clearly and was solidly written. Your prose will come with practice :) Get to it! :D Edit: Hilariously, this is also on the front page now, https://goinswriter.com/write-drunk/ https://goinswriter.com/write-drunk/ but they are being disingenuous in their interpretation.