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Who writes sales copy like that home page anymore? The first sentence describing your product is "it's unique"? That's the most important thing you want me to k
by yodon 8y ago
Who writes sales copy like that home page anymore? The first sentence describing your product is "it's unique"? That's the most important thing you want me to know as a visitor?
Ditch all the self-serving superlatives and tell me what it does and what it does for me, not how impressed you are with what you built.
I'm probably even in the target market for this product, but the home page is so terrible I won't be back to try to figure it out.
- dpwm 8y agoAlso, from the "why the cloud" page: "Faster than live" Really? I think that's a little bit too far. Don't know much about the product. If it works, it's impressive enough: let it sell itself.
- noja 8y agoCalm down, you could get the constructive points of your message across in a nicer way.
- eagsalazar2 8y agoSomething they did to the scrolling on their landing page is so crazy and irritating.