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yeah, I know about that, it's optimized for mobile devices, so the main target devices are iOs, WebOs, Android, Symbian....cellphones. http://www.gmbhnews.com

• GFischer 16y ago
  Ah, sorry, I misunderstood. About the http://www.gmbhnews.net/ http://www.gmbhnews.net/ page: my very first impression is that the english is not as polished as it could be. For example: "more than 3.3 billions" should be "more than 3.3 billion" And the bold font on some parts and not on another doesn't seem to follow a discernable logic at first glimpse. There was an "offer HN" that offered help with the copy. I'm not knowledgeable about that by any stretch of the imagination, but for example, I'd emphasize "Let us give your mobile users a good time on your site" over the "We optimize sites for more than 3.3 billions mobile devices worldwide" And maybe "Give your mobile users.." instead of "Let us give"... and so on. Are the testimonies real? If so, good job :) If not, I wouldn't include them. On the signup form, I'd try to emphasize the text over the action (the "click here")... also, it doesn't feel usable, it doesn't look like a signup form (even though it's aesthetically more pleasing than a standard html input of course :) ). HTML 5 has a "placeholder text" feature (which ironically I can't see as my browser doesn't support it!): http://diveintohtml5.org/forms.html#placeholder http://diveintohtml5.org/forms.html#placeholder but you get the idea I hope :)
  • Concours 16y ago
    Ok got it, I've improved the text in the meantime, you might take a look, and yes the testimonials are real, thanks.