> "and the admitted student who was erroneously denied his place at a university due to his father’s failure to pay back a bank loan." It seems like you can st

> "and the admitted student who was erroneously denied his place at a university due to his father’s failure to pay back a bank loan." It seems like you can strike "erroneously" from that sentence, since the source it cites doesn't imply it was a mistake at all. Collective punishment is worth criticizing. As per usual, when implementing some Orwellian scheme, there will be a crowd that states there's nothing to worry about, and that people are over-reacting, and that it's really not so bad after all. I wonder what the social credit score of Chinese dissidents will look like. [0] https://www.businessinsider.com/china-social-credit-affects-childs-university-enrolment-2018-7 https://www.businessinsider.com/china-social-credit-affects-...