I like that bit at the end about entrepreneurial age, it hits home in that business experience really is a matter of "decide you'll do it and start working," vs

I like that bit at the end about entrepreneurial age, it hits home in that business experience really is a matter of "decide you'll do it and start working," vs. a "pay your dues and get the credit" credential; it even has "level ups" when you make some breakthrough or realization on how the process really works. This could be developed into an essay on its own.