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It is a confusing sentence. Semicolons are stupid and shouldn't be used anymore. It has a random "then" thrown in there for no reason.

• pier25 8y ago
  A bit poetic maybe, but it sounds fine to me. Maybe because English is not my first language.
• CogitoCogito 8y ago
  I find the sentence very confusing, but I don't think it has anything to do with semicolons. It just seems like unclear writing to me.
• jacquesm 8y ago
  Try reading it out loud. Keep in mind that the original is in French and this is a translation of that French text so you are probably more at war with the translator than with the writer. Even so, to me - also a non-native English speaker - there wasn't a sentence in the article that I could not understand, sometimes it just takes a bit more effort.
• tralarpa 8y ago
  I am not a native speaker and always eager to improve. I understood the "then" as "at that time (in the past)". Is that wrong?
  • cco 8y ago
    That is correct.