Would you like me to edit it so it says "Now your service availability is tied to not just the global DNS system that literally anything that wants to exist on

Would you like me to edit it so it says "Now your service availability is tied to not just the global DNS system that literally anything that wants to exist on the web with not just an IP but a named host relies on, but a secondary routing entity that sits on top of standard DNS and does fancy things"? Because I'm pretty sure we all know what I meant when I pointed out using Cloudflare means gaining a convenience at the expense of being at the mercy of third party outages.