Hey Lanerapp, I'll take you on this offer: would you mind proofreading my headlines on http://gmbhnews.com/make-mobile-site/ http://gmbhnews.com/make-mobile-sit

Hey Lanerapp, I'll take you on this offer: would you mind proofreading my headlines on http://gmbhnews.com/make-mobile-site/ http://gmbhnews.com/make-mobile-site/ ? The very first taglines on the white zone. Thanks for the offer. Edit:If you don't mind, please to send me your suggestions via email (see profile)