It's not awful, but as user24 says - it's VERY salesy. Think about what the problem is for a blogger - making some money out of their hobby, in the easiest pos

It's not awful, but as user24 says - it's VERY salesy. Think about what the problem is for a blogger - making some money out of their hobby, in the easiest possible way, without annoying their readers. If you are not a blogger yourself, why not interview blogger friends to see what the issues or problems that they are having either with making money or with using tools (not getting paid etc.) And yeah, don't say CEO - and use language your mother and father would understand - I know some bloggers are technical - but many are not. Good luck ;) - (and spelling error in your title BTW)