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by jontywareing 16y ago
Good point! If you have any other comments I'd love to hear them.
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- Groxx 16y agoI think I'd swap the first and second paragraphs. That way, it makes more sense after "What happened?!", and reassures people ASAP so they won't lose interest / be confused before they find out what happened.