A question would be whether the replacement forms a valid analogous statement, one which reveals unrecognized hypocrisy. In this case, it's a partially success

A question would be whether the replacement forms a valid analogous statement, one which reveals unrecognized hypocrisy. In this case, it's a partially successful analogy. Both mass tourist and immigrants travel to foreign lands, but one of them does so optionally while the other typically does so out of real or perceived necessity.