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I'm being nitpicky here, but in the about page, get rid of the "developed the definitive..." Its too alliterative. Also, what is " the definitive platform?" wir
by bridgetroll 18y ago
I'm being nitpicky here, but in the about page, get rid of the "developed the definitive..." Its too alliterative. Also, what is "
the definitive platform?" wirewize? another CEI product?
And we know nothing about you. Maybe some more depth and please avoid marketslick nonspeak, it tends to turn people off.