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Why did you italicize so many words?
by fireattack 8y ago
Why did you italicize so many words?
- pandemic_region 8y agoItalian heritage.
- nelsonic 8y agoexactly! but seriously, it's just a [bad] habit ... thanks for pointing it out. hope it did not detract from my message.
- ledneb 8y agoYou wrote a great response! Assuming you genuinely want feedback on it; your writing style does detract a bit from what you're saying - the emphasis and braces don't read like native English. My advice is try not to use quotes, italics and braces at all - go cold turkey! Then you'll probably find yourself using them when you actually _need_ them. :)
- bookofjoe 8y agoA bit OT: "Using an exclamation point only serves to call attention to the writer."—Miss Steiger, 10th grade English, Washington H.S., Milwaukee, 1964
- elyobo 8y agoI find it hard to read, because I find myself mentally pausing and stressing those words in my head and there are a lot of them! Also the square brackets and the quotes around words that don't seem to warrant them - I'm not sure what you mean by them and so I'm not certain whether I'm getting the same message that you're intending to convey. If I can just ignore them it seems to read better but it's hard work to do so, but maybe that's just me :)
- e4325f 8y agoWhat's with all the square brackets also? Such an unusual writing style
- PascLeRasc 8y agoHey, I like it. Yes it takes longer to read, but people don't speak at one cadence all the time. We make words longer or take short pauses to emphasize our point. I like the creativity.
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- Eyes 8y agoHalf of that github doc is in italics too.
- MaxBarraclough 8y agoI don't think it's a bad style of writing for a forum like this. In natural speech, we communicate a lot by our use of emphasis. Consider three sentences which could carry very different meanings: Polite decline: "No, thank you." Firm decline: "No, thank you." Scolding decline: "No, thank you." Perhaps not the best examples, but if italics helps reduce ambiguity and preserve more subtlety, I'm for it.
- klmr 8y agoExcept it seems to be completely random words, with a "few" random quotation marks and brackets [thrown] in the mix. Taken together it has the opposite effect of what it’s supposed to achieve.
- MaxBarraclough 8y agoOn closer inspection I have to agree.
- Kagerjay 8y agoPersonally, I only use italicization when I make a digressive sidepoint (for instance, using e.g. or examples given), or offer a different perspective away from the central voice I use. Its a matter of formatting preference though. Italicization helps improve readability of writing if used correctly I have never really seen anyone in the states use italicization with the "No, thank you" example. Its better to just use emojis instead to get the same message across. Italicization used this way is sometimes treated as sarcasm or passive aggressiveness. Using italicization this way more excessively eventually goes to things like * <bashes away at keyboard> * or writing actions in written form. Those aren't subtle, but they are really awkward to read.