Your tl;dr isn't _wrong_, per se. But the article is really well written, and I feel like there's more depth to it than what you've said. Plus, your statement

Your tl;dr isn't _wrong_, per se. But the article is really well written, and I feel like there's more depth to it than what you've said. Plus, your statement comes off as kind of cynical and snarky ("no shit, guys" is the tone, even though you probably didn't mean it that way). The piece itself makes some pretty interesting, non-obvious points I think.