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Of course you know this bit of doggerel verse, everyone does; ... “There must be some way out of here,” said the joker to the thief “There’s too much confusi
by cuboidGoat 8y ago
Of course you know this bit of doggerel verse, everyone does;
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“There must be some way out of here,” said the joker to the thief
“There’s too much confusion, I can’t get no relief
Businessmen, they drink my wine, plowmen dig my earth
None of them along the line know what any of it is worth”
“No reason to get excited,” the thief, he kindly spoke
“There are many here among us who feel that life is but a joke
But you and I, we’ve been through that, and this is not our fate
So let us not talk falsely now, the hour is getting late”
All along the watchtower, princes kept the view
While all the women came and went, barefoot servants, too
Outside in the distance a wildcat did growl
Two riders were approaching, the wind began to howl
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Have you ever heard it with the lines reversed though?
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Two riders were approaching, the wind began to howl
Outside in the distance a wildcat did growl
While all the women came and went, barefoot servants, too
All along the watchtower, princes kept the view
So let us not talk falsely now, the hour is getting late”
But you and I, we’ve been through that, and this is not our fate
“There are many here among us who feel that life is but a joke
“No reason to get excited,” the thief, he kindly spoke
None of them along the line know what any of it is worth”
Businessmen, they drink my wine, plowmen dig my earth
“There’s too much confusion, I can’t get no relief
“There must be some way out of here,” said the joker to the thief
...
Now you have to admit, that is not the work of someone who doesn't know what they are doing with language, irrespective of whether or not you personally like it.
- leephillips 8y agoI think I've heard that song. Interesting what you point out, although I'm not moved to admit what you claim I have to admit. I think the lines are awkward and the writing kind of crude, like Dylan generally. For example, writing "did growl" rather than "growled" in an attempt to add more feet to the line is highschool level. Given all that, the imagery is far more interesting than in the typical rock song, which makes one perk up on first hearing.
- cuboidGoat 8y agoI'd assume 'wildcat did growl' was chosen for for the use of staccato to create rhythm from the consonants, which would be absent with 'wildcat growled', rather than to add more feet to the line, but hey, we are just layering ephemera on ephemera here.