His entire book is like that. On the one hand, it does rub the wrong way. I'm supposed to believe this is a man of and from the street? OTOH, it adds useful b

His entire book is like that. On the one hand, it does rub the wrong way. I'm supposed to believe this is a man of and from the street? OTOH, it adds useful background color to his story. Probably finely studied and tuned for publication, but still useful. You should check out the audiobook.