The entire page is fiction, presumably. Hopefully. That being said, it's not professional fiction. It's possibly the first work of the writer, and works becaus

The entire page is fiction, presumably. Hopefully. That being said, it's not professional fiction. It's possibly the first work of the writer, and works because of talent (probably) and a good premise (definitely), but it's sorely lacking in polish and editing. I wouldn't look too closely at the cracks. :)