Good point. I realized at the time that it wasn't quite right, but didn't figure out how to fix it. I should have written "those in Africa," or even "most of th

Good point. I realized at the time that it wasn't quite right, but didn't figure out how to fix it. I should have written "those in Africa," or even "most of those in Africa." Sorry for letting a rushed comment perpetuate the common Western stereotype of conflating all of Africa as if one single thing.