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"Message" implies an actual quote from the man. "Example" would be more appropriate in this context.
by zeteo 16y ago
"Message" implies an actual quote from the man. "Example" would be more appropriate in this context.
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- r7000 16y agoLike many words in English it does not have such a discrete meaning. A story or experience can have a "message" the same way it might have a "moral". In fact "moral" is often defined as: the message conveyed by a story. "Example" would have been a poorer word in its place.
- senthil_rajasek 16y ago"Babbage's message..." and "A message from Babbage's Life...". are not identical. The former is a personal article or note from Babbage. I got down voted for exactly what zeteo said...
- r7000 16y ago"A message from Babbage's Life..." is too long. A title can trade ambiguity for elegance if the essay is clear.
- senthil_rajasek 16y ago"Babbage's heart-warming message for the middle-aged" and "A message from Babbage's life for the middle-aged" to me both titles sound elegant but the former is misleading and the latter is correct. The title is not trading ambiguity, it is just misleading.
- zeteo 16y agoYes, a story can have a message, but "Babbage" is a person, not a story. "This story's message" has a different agent from "Jim's message". Jim is always the _author_ in the second meaning. "Babbage's message" made the title shorter, but also misleading. A complete title of "Babbage's heart-warming" would have made it even shorter, but I hope you're not advocating in favor of that!
- r7000 16y agoReflecting today I believe Jim's inspiring message to us is to live life to the fullest even if that requires participation in extreme sports. Jim did not write a letter. He was the "author" of the sentiment (according to the speaker) by the way he lived his life.
- bhjodokast 16y agoIt implies that to you? Is that due to your nature or your nurturing?