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An interesting aspect of collecting all these space stories in one place is that it allows you quickly confirm how many conform to the same science-journalism t
by jessriedel 8y ago
An interesting aspect of collecting all these space stories in one place is that it allows you quickly confirm how many conform to the same science-journalism template: an extended human-interest story that doesn't start dribbling bits of science until many paragraphs in. Even when the focus of the article is a human's role, the writer follows the formula of telling a compelling anecdote rather than actually delivering important facts.
"In early February, Gwynne Shotwell arrived in Saudi Arabia for a bit of last-minute cleanup...."
"Kathleen Howell never aspired to walk on the moon. When she watched the first lunar landing as a teenager in 1969, she was more intrigued by the looping route that brought the Apollo 11 astronauts from Earth to the Sea of Tranquility and back..."
"On July 18, outside the West Texas town of Van Horn, hundreds of Blue Origin employees and their families and friends gathered to watch the New Shepard rocket blast off toward the edge of space...."
"The chicken sandwich has to get to space. This is what everyone at World View Enterprises Inc. was thinking as they set to work in the predawn hours of June 29, 2017, at the Page Municipal Airport in Arizona....
"Shou-Ching Jaminet, a molecular biologist and former researcher at Harvard Medical School, spent almost a year preparing an experiment for her small biotech startup, Angiex, to study the effects of weightlessness on a potential cancer drug. By June she was nervous with anticipation,..."
Does no one else get sick of this? I would love more inverted-pyramid coverage of science.
- Eequei3i 8y ago> Does no one else get sick of this? I roll my eyes every time I see such stories and look for a more technical coverage of the topic somewhere else. I suspect that's a difference between thing- vs. people-oriented readers. I assume the former are in the minority.
- jessriedel 8y agoIt's not so much that I'm oriented toward things as that I just hate people...
- thraway180306 8y agoI just hate people Wow, that's rich. After some decades I discovered that physics too is about people. Social aspect is inescapable. That didn't turn me off, but taught to appreciate the narrative aspect as integral and thus maybe a part of the beauty. Not necessarily in the watered down journalism (which is fine, as a scientist I'm not the target audience) but the fact that the big narratives that harnessed collective resources previously were just that: big narratives. That was one of the functions and enablers of the Space Program itself, not sustained nor repeated since, to the determent of our capability. And that's what bystanders look for in science. (Not just them, if your social status and self-esteem hinges on you being a scientist, that's also taking part in narrative that enables you to thrive despite hating people). If you really just hate people, then take example in Teller - he also knew the power of storytelling but just used it mercilessly.
- jessriedel 8y agoEasy there, Hoss. The ellipsis was intended to mark my comment as a joke.
- thraway180306 8y agoI made the joke on you.
- golergka 8y agoI don't know. I'm a pretty extroverted guy, love communicating with people and performing live in front of an audience, with a lot of social connections - and yet, when I want to read about rocket technology, I'd rather read about the technology, with detailed illustrations of dissected engines and graphs and all the interesting details, rather than read yet another description of a yet another postdoc's day in the lab.
- 52-6F-62 8y ago> I'd rather read about the technology, with detailed illustrations of dissected engines and graphs and all the interesting details, rather than read yet another description of a yet another postdoc's day in the lab. I personally like both, but I wouldn't go seeking hard tech and science from Bloomberg Businessweek. It's a good publication, but hard, detailed science is not it's MO, and never was. It's like a series of pointers to hard science subjects (if that happens to be among the subjects) for business minds and investors. It covers politics as well, but it's stated purpose is how these matters reflect on the business world, not overly concerned with details of policy unless they affect the subject of business. Occasionally they have more hard-hitting pieces, but for the most part, that's what it is. I think that's a good thing. The many people decrying "watered down journalism" and that there are too few technical details here, are really missing the forest for the trees.
- golergka 8y agoI'd love to read on the busines side of these things, too - anything but the personal stories, please.
- TeMPOraL 8y ago> I suspect that's a difference between thing- vs. people-oriented readers. I assume the former are in the minority. Might be also because you know that most of the "people-oriented" content in such articles is bullshit, misrepresented to create story progression? That it has negative educational value? Are people who like such articles aware of this?
- rory096 8y agoI think calling this science coverage is a stretch (except for the cancer one). The new era of rockets lies at the intersection of business and engineering. I do tire of anecdotal journalism, but if it belongs anywhere it's in biographical profiles like the Shotwell piece and in magazines generally. It gets old quick when actual news buries the lede.
- throwawaymath 8y agoYeah, I don't like it at all either. But I attribute that to the fact that I've read so many stories in that style popping up on HN, NYT, WSJ or Economist. There's probably nothing wrong with that style in itself and it does add a bit of flourish to what might otherwise be a very short article. But it does become grating if you're exposed to articles like it so often that it seems like a rote pattern. Sometimes when I read reporting like this it makes me think that human language isn't so complex as to be intractable. For all our mastery of the subtleties and nuances of human communication, it appears that (for the most part), our most widely disseminated writing is formulaic and templated. It strikes me that this sort of writing is like the four chords that virtually all popular music is written in. When you start to see it so often there almost seems to be something sing-songey about this kind of writing. It's not just the narrative structure, use of in media res, or focus on characters instead of facts - it's also the words themselves, which seem to be used to construct a finite number of idioms and phrases arranged in a very usual pattern. I suppose every sophisticated thing in the world is mundane when you're watched it long enough to see a pattern. TVTropes gives me the same feeling about entertainment. I'm also of the opinion that this style of writing is mostly disagreeable for people who just want the technical content. But to be frank, there are very good periodicals for Quanta Magazine for that kind of purpose. Popular journalism isn't really intended for that.
- Eequei3i 8y ago> add a bit of flourish to what might otherwise be a very short article Brevity would save time and be easier on everyone's scarce attention.
- throwawaymath 8y agoI agree, but that's not what everyone wants. I don't think they necessarily should want it, either. If writing in this style gets more people to read then so much the better - the complaints about it in this thread are, if we're going to be fully self-aware about it, a very tiny and unrepresentative microcosm compared to the total readership in play. We're not all running around as hyperrational machine gods :). What matters to some people doesn't matter to others, and it's probably very hard to optimize widely disseminated content for accessibility, enjoyability and depth of technical coverage. I might go so far as to say you need to pick two.
- toomanybeersies 8y agoIt's pop science coverage in Bloomberg, for the layman who has no interest in space exploration outside of the article. Articles filled with technical detail would bore the reader. If you want actual comprehensive, tech orientated coverage, there are other more suitable publications out there.
- maxxxxx 8y agoCan you recommend any publications?
- black6 8y agoFor the space industry, The Space Review[0] is a fantastic, regularly updated collection of essays. [0] http://thespacereview.com/ http://thespacereview.com/
- maxxxxx 8y agoThis looks good. And double points for having a simple site with RSS feed.
- Symmetry 8y agoNASA Spaceflight is pretty good. https://www.nasaspaceflight.com/ https://www.nasaspaceflight.com/
- simias 8y agoI always thought that it was just an attempt at making the piece look more literary and less dry, it's especially common in long form journalism. You want a protagonist, acts, a resolution. It's news but also a novel. I think many people also want to be able to relate and empathize with the character in the story and don't like very technical pieces, see for instance 99% of Hollywood blockbusters. You want romance and tension, not cold sci-fi. I don't mind it too much personally but I'm sure that a lot of the time many of these details are over-emphasized or maybe sometimes completely made up to paint a more vivid picture. That's fine for a novel but not so great for a journalistic endeavor.
- slfnflctd 8y ago> it's especially common in long form journalism And always has been. This is tradition as much as anything-- and as with other traditions, some of it probably just boils down to how brains and cultures currently work.
- maxxxxx 8y agoI miss that too. But it seems accepted wisdom that details about science or technology are boring and have to be wrapped in some human interest story. I am now listening to podcasts like Omega Tau where people talk about the technology and not just about people. Just to be clear : I am OK with reading about the backgrounds and motivations of people but please don't skip the tech part.
- conception 8y agoIt's because research has discovered that people care about single, individual stories; especially those they can relate. So stories like this are how they capture people not already interested in the topics' interest. You see this everywhere. It's not "see this home get remodeled" it's "hear the story of this family and how remodeling their home changed their life", not "bake an awesome cupcake" but "while Betty bakes let's see her family at home and how her mum is doing". Most people just don't connect with big picture ideas or raw data.
- mrfusion 8y agoI wonder what research that was. I hate that kind of stuff. I’m noticing sci shows are also trying to insert way too much interpersonal drama for my tastes too. I had to stop watching travelers in season two even though I loved season one.
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- jessriedel 8y agoThat's an explanation but not a justification. People like celebrity gossip too, but newspapers feel a duty (due to both external social pressure and an internal code) to not include updates on the opinion of the Kardashians as part of their war coverage. Although the upteenth description of a random postdoc's laboratory life (an example used elsewhere in this thread) seems less trashy than the Kardashians, I think they have similar news value.
- Qworg 8y agoIt is a justification. If newspapers were a public good, they could afford to write pieces that didn't necessarily land well with the public, but had more substance around the science. While newspapers don't include the Kardashians in the war coverage, they DO include the Kardashians. War is very different from Science - it is straightforward, exciting to read about, and has an immediate human interest. Science is none of those things.
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- grondilu 8y agoI hate this kind of articles. I've clicked to read about some new, exciting scientific/tech discovery, and the first paragraphs I have to read have no relation whatsoever to what I was expecting. Those paragraphs look like an attempt the author made to show off his writing skills as if he were a novelist or something. Too many times I thought "to the point already!" when reading those paragraphs.
- JumpCrisscross 8y ago> telling a compelling anecdote rather than actually delivering important facts I worked in this industry, including with some of the companies named. Business is about people. The human aspects are important facts. If you just want the science, consider subscribing to science journals' e-mail lists.
- rossdavidh 8y agoMy theory: when you have to crank out several articles a day to pay the rent, you tend to need a formula to go by. This formula is more suitable for some kinds of stories than others, but what I know about the economics of journalism suggests they don't pay enough to spend much time thinking about who the audience would be for _this_ story, and what that audience would appreciate reading.
- scarecrowbob 8y agoWell, to be blunt, you don't have a story without a protagonist and a problem. And if you don't have a story, you don't have a reader. If you don't have readers, then there isn't much point in writing. So you don't see much popular journalism without a protagonist and a problem. I dunno if that's good or bad, but that's what we have and there are reasons for that situation.
- Eequei3i 8y ago> Well, to be blunt, you don't have a story without a protagonist and a problem. What if the protagonist is an object? I find the asteroid that wiped out the dinosaurs is quite a mover of things! And that evolution guy has many fantastic, quirky stories to tell. And I often read science-fiction for the interesting world-building. The people-shenanigans are just a vehicle to show the world to me.
- nicholas73 8y agoIt's like the funnel intro format everyone gets hammered into writing while in school. I never cared for it, and now have to filter it out when reading articles. It's pure noise rather than adding to the content.
- theothermkn 8y agoI was raised on the inverted pyramid, too, and like it. However, the benefit of easy scanning was secondary to its main design driver, manual (and literal) cut and past. They needed to guarantee that they could cut a story basically anywhere to fit the layout, and the continuation would be on a different page, with more ads. The “internet ramble” is also designed with ad revenue in mind; the reader has to read and scroll through ads to get to the part they actually care about. Its indulgent meandering is maddening, and degrades journalism and storytelling.
- interfixus 8y ago> Does no one else get sick of this? One paragraph of that insufferable nonsense, and as a rule, I'm out.
- MarkLowenstein 8y agoYeah, people keep saying they do this because of some "research" but I suspect that whatever research that was is very wrong. Here's what doesn't add up: the story of someone's life and activities is only truly interesting for a small fraction of the population, maybe one out of 50 people. So if you're going to write an article about a newsworthy scientific accomplishment, what are the chances that the people involved also happen to have a compelling life story? Pretty low. It's obvious to a numerate person that the first several paragraphs are there for no good reason, yet the author insists on wasting our time anyway, so we get annoyed and find something else to do.
- TeMPOraL 8y ago> what are the chances that the people involved also happen to have a compelling life story? Pretty low. Fear not. Journalists know that the way around this is to cherry-pick quotes, add some weasel world, and misrepresent the reality so that that person's life story suddenly sounds like a script for a Hollywood movie.
- AnimalMuppet 8y ago> the story of someone's life and activities is only truly interesting for a small fraction of the population, maybe one out of 50 people. I think you're wrong here. Most people relate more to people than to gadgets. We're the exception here, not the rule. HN readers want the facts, but for the general population, the human interest angle improves the article. It gives them a reason to care.
- MarkLowenstein 8y agoA bit late, but I see now that I biffed on expressing myself here, and I don't blame you all for thinking I'm wrong. What I meant was that one out of 50 people's life stories are interesting, not that only one out of 50 people find life stories interesting.
- avoutthere 8y agoSomebody please build a news distiller that extracts the facts from such articles.
- TeMPOraL 8y agoI definitely do. That's why I just skimmed this article, quickly looking if there are any hyperlinks or keywords suggesting something new. I found just this[0]. Total time spent on article: 10 seconds. And people complain millennials have too short an attention span to read long-form. I suggest that maybe it's because long-form articles today have incredibly low information density, and are generally a waste of time. (The article had pretty pictures, though.) -- [0] - https://www.nasa.gov/topics/moon-to-mars/lunar-outpost https://www.nasa.gov/topics/moon-to-mars/lunar-outpost
- Symmetry 8y agoI'm equally annoyed at many of those but Gwynne Shotwell is fundamentally an interesting person who's integral to the workings of SpaceX and it was good to have an article about her.
- jessriedel 8y agoI think Gwynne Shotwel is super interesting and have even briefly blogged about her. That doesn't mean what she had for breakfast yesterday is interesting; that's just a fun distraction.
- HeyLaughingBoy 8y agoScience in and of itself is really only interesting to a select few people. Science as it relates to the lives of real people is far more interesting to a much wider group of people. Even after spending my entire adult life in engineering, I'd rather have the latter, TBH.
- nerdponx 8y agoThis is a trend everywhere, not just in science journalism. Everybody wants to be the New York Times Magazine.