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Who edited this? Nobody. "weather this name is an acronym or..." An image labeled "A screen show of the Lisa..." which has multiple items clearly labeled as c
by daotoad 8y ago
Who edited this?
Nobody.
"weather this name is an acronym or..."
An image labeled "A screen show of the Lisa..." which has multiple items clearly labeled as coming from a Mac...
"Furthermore, Jobs had leaved the Lisa team..."
Odd unattributed quotes from ???
The article asserts that Macintosh product design was key to its success. Then shows an original Macintosh with a Mac Color Classic 2 (a machine that hardly had an impact) but completely ignores the original clear iMacs (the computer which was part of revitalization of Apple and whose design owed much to the original Mac).
- sp332 8y agoIt doesn't look like anyone who works at the site has English as a first language. https://www.inexhibit.com/about-us-2/ https://www.inexhibit.com/about-us-2/
- Klover 8y agoThe English proofing tools for MS Word, and likely competing platforms, should be able to catch most of those. Those are the green squiggly lines. Stylistic choices I am fine with, as long as they're readable. Grammar and spelling errors should not be so prevalent if you respect your writing and your audience.