I quite like the idea and find myself doing something similar, especially when writing for clarity is key. I think any easy way of automating this would be to l

I quite like the idea and find myself doing something similar, especially when writing for clarity is key. I think any easy way of automating this would be to line break at every subordinate clause and break at commas whenever the syllable count dictates a breath. This could also be a trick for speed reading, as the structure of the text would be more obvious and visible on the page.