Your premise (that Lessig's article is a movie review) is not true which makes any conclusion you make invalid. The misleading HN headline notwithstanding, Les

Your premise (that Lessig's article is a movie review) is not true which makes any conclusion you make invalid. The misleading HN headline notwithstanding, Lessig's article is a commentary on the nature of Internet and how it was missed by the movie authors. Not to mention that nowhere in the article Lessig gives any indication that he knows how to make a better movie out of it. Quite to the contrary: whenever he talks about the movie as it is, he prises it.