It seems like the ToS is just filled with typos and "insert here" type statements that you'd find in a template. I don't think there are specific items that th

It seems like the ToS is just filled with typos and "insert here" type statements that you'd find in a template. I don't think there are specific items that the parent commenter is trying to change; instead, the entire document just seems sloppy... Best of luck with your business, but make sure the fundamental legal contract between you and your customers is thorough so that both you _and your customers_ are protected.