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Good morning hackers, seeking criticism

2 points by kleevr 18y ago

http://kleevr.blogspot.com/2008/04/screaming-tangent.html Please rip it all to hell if you've got 5 minutes to burn. I'm young, overly ambitious, and (I hope) prepared for a taste of real criticism from those whom I hope with time to consider me a peer.

kleevr 18y ago
(clickable) http://kleevr.blogspot.com/2008/04/screaming-tangent.html http://kleevr.blogspot.com/2008/04/screaming-tangent.html
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- kleevr 18y ago
  No dude, I wish I could've seen your post pre-edit. There isn't a language barrier. I'm just wickedly sleep deprived. I was just trying something.
  - LPTS 18y ago
    Ohh... I said I didn't think you were wrong, because I didn't think you managed to use language well enough to rise to the standard of communicating something that would be able to be judged right or wrong. Then I suggested that maybe you were really really really high. Or sleep deprived. Or using a highly technical language I did not know. Then I thought there was no way someone who actually spoke english as a first language would of wrote that and decided I was an ass making inappropriate fun of someone who didn't speak english as a first language and was making an honest effort to communicate. I don't want to discourage non native english speakers going out on a limb and trying to talk, so I deleted my post. Knowing you speak english as a first language, I feel better about saying you didn't make any goddamn sense to me with that word jazz. It's cool I guess that you're thinking so unconventionally that your post would fit in an ee cummings journal.
    - kleevr 18y ago
      Awesome, thanks for reposting. That movie (it's a B-movie) was based on a short story by Phillip K Dick. And, I used some BNSF grammar.
jrockway 18y ago
I see words but they don't parse into anything I can understand.
nuggien 18y ago
What am I supposed to criticize? Your post reminds me of a time a guy asked me to do a code review of his java hello world program. I couldn't tell if he was f'ing with me, or if he was really seriously that much of a n00b.

2 points by kleevr 18y ago

kleevr 18y ago

(clickable) http://kleevr.blogspot.com/2008/04/screaming-tangent.html http://kleevr.blogspot.com/2008/04/screaming-tangent.html

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kleevr 18y ago
No dude, I wish I could've seen your post pre-edit. There isn't a language barrier. I'm just wickedly sleep deprived. I was just trying something.
- LPTS 18y ago
  Ohh... I said I didn't think you were wrong, because I didn't think you managed to use language well enough to rise to the standard of communicating something that would be able to be judged right or wrong. Then I suggested that maybe you were really really really high. Or sleep deprived. Or using a highly technical language I did not know. Then I thought there was no way someone who actually spoke english as a first language would of wrote that and decided I was an ass making inappropriate fun of someone who didn't speak english as a first language and was making an honest effort to communicate. I don't want to discourage non native english speakers going out on a limb and trying to talk, so I deleted my post. Knowing you speak english as a first language, I feel better about saying you didn't make any goddamn sense to me with that word jazz. It's cool I guess that you're thinking so unconventionally that your post would fit in an ee cummings journal.
  - kleevr 18y ago
    Awesome, thanks for reposting. That movie (it's a B-movie) was based on a short story by Phillip K Dick. And, I used some BNSF grammar.

jrockway 18y ago

I see words but they don't parse into anything I can understand.

nuggien 18y ago

What am I supposed to criticize? Your post reminds me of a time a guy asked me to do a code review of his java hello world program. I couldn't tell if he was f'ing with me, or if he was really seriously that much of a n00b.