The short, simple sentences and the unassuming vocabulary made it feel like an ESL piece for college students. I also found it moderately interesting, but it re

The short, simple sentences and the unassuming vocabulary made it feel like an ESL piece for college students. I also found it moderately interesting, but it really could have benefited from a more personal touch (why and how did she get into this business?) and longer, more engaging anecdotes.